One Page Design Fixes Based on Practical Feedback

Activity:

 - Fixing One Page Design based on feedback from Practicals

Date: 16.3.2025

Notes:

The feedback I received for my design

- The player has no description (health, jump height, attack damage).

- More detailed descriptions (some things lack clear descriptions, making them confusing).

- Indicate where to place dialogues (it's nice that there's a story, but there's no clear indication of where it should be displayed).

- Better differentiation between levels (it's unclear where walls are and where they aren't).

- Color coding (which pressure pad opens which door).

- Poor textures (some blocks look like breakable ones even though they aren't).

- More space (there's no room to write notes on the paper).

Overall I think even though some improvements are definitely needed, however I ran out of space with the A3 format. Maybe another One Page Design is needed, because the story on this page doesn’t make much sense.

Invested Hours: About 2,5 hours

Outcome: New version of One Page Design for Project A (now called project B)